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Mr Martini
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Beneath The Line

0 posted 2015-12-08 01:26 AM


Seemed bright enough as
nothing but the stare
of the same old sun
shone off the windshield
of her vintage pink Cadillac
which she skillfully parked
next to his Crown 'Vicky
that up unto that time had
commanded the attention of the
babes that told from behind bank counters
of the wavy fair-haired guy in the parking lot
with the '56 Crown 'Vicky and how he
could open them up faster than the pop-top
of a beer in the hands of an in-port sailor
and whose baby-blues were constantly
running their nylons and unfastening
their bra hooks while at the same time
laying for the old dame in the vintage Cadillac
who did better than most with Mary Kay
and placed the majority of her profits
on her own face and body which was
exactly what the guy in the parking lot was admiring
at this moment when the door of the pink Cadillac
opened and those slim old legs swung out
with just a tinge of thigh as a freebie to the fellow
in the Crown 'Vicky who decided he'd seen all he could
stand for one day and made his way over to the old dame and said ".......................".

"Guess the secret woid an' win yourself a '56 Crown Vicky and a free invite to my first Mary Kay party. BYOB

Here's to you and here's to me and should we ever disagree, here's to me!

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Lori Grosser Rhoden
Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere
1 posted 2015-12-08 06:14 AM


Kind Sir,
This gave me a chuckle and put an end to my whistling. ~L

Ticklefingers
Senior Member
Posts 710
Louisiana
2 posted 2015-12-08 01:49 PM


"the fellow in the Crown 'Vicky who decided he'd seen all he could stand for one day and made his way over to the old dame and said, "pardon my intrusion, but can you fix a flat?".

Just when I thought I knew your MO, you shift gears on me Mr. Martini and come up with this. I believe it to be the longest sentence I've ever read.

Now about the 'Vicky. Has it got whitewall tires and a 312 Interceptor under the hood? The 'old dame' isn't one of your 'tricks in the trunk' is she?


88's 'fer fun friend

She told me "play one for your supper Danny and maybe you'll get breakfast".

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