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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere 
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Entrancing is the page Blank Cursor heart beating Waiting For the dance To begin ‘tween thoughts And fingertips No waltzing Not tap Something modern And moody Tremendous rushes Pensive pecking Stupefying silence Rapid reversal And so it goes Red lines appear And disappear And green ones That last forever Entranced in this dance Upon the page Mesmerized For days at a time LGR©11/30/15 |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Hah! Yes, I understand and am at one with this one. Mesmerized big time. |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
Yes, I'll bet you can! You are much more prolific than I. ~L |
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ice Member Elite
since 2003-05-17
Posts 3404Pennsylvania |
yes, it is dancelike...this writing of verse we have partners, (brain, and heart) and corners, (words we like, but reject) and of course the rest of the square... (the community of our words) we go round, and round the square, (rejecting words, and phrases) but land in the comfort of home in the end. ( the finished piece) This is what your poem said to me, and I like what you said. |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
Thank you ice! I'm glad you could relate. ~L |
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