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Lori Grosser Rhoden
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0 posted 2015-11-28 04:53 PM



Behold the prism that I am
choose your color in my vision
Do not be distracted
by rainbows I have thrown
My light is refracted
it is not my own.

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Mr Martini
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Beneath The Line
1 posted 2015-11-28 06:43 PM


What you do Lori Rhoden, the prism, with the light entering you, is exceeded only by the light leaving you illuminating others within showers of color.

Bravo!

Here's to you and here's to me and should we ever disagree, here's to me!

Lori Grosser Rhoden
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Fair to middlin' of nowhere
2 posted 2015-11-28 07:14 PM


Ah, you are much too kind. That is a special thing to say. Bless your heart. Thank you ~L

Mr Martini
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3 posted 2015-11-28 08:54 PM


Thank you my dear for the blessing, but I fear it is ill-deserved, for you see, in time, a schmoozer always pays his due.


Au Revoir  

Here's to you and here's to me and should we ever disagree, here's to me!

Lori Grosser Rhoden
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since 2009-10-10
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Fair to middlin' of nowhere
4 posted 2015-11-28 09:04 PM


Yes, the schmoozer becomes the schmoozee, you'll take yer dern blessin' an like it! It is neither deserved nor earned kind sir, it comes with the territory, you are entitled. ~L

Mr Martini
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5 posted 2015-11-29 01:33 AM


Touche' mon amie.


Au Revoir

Here's to you and here's to me and should we ever disagree, here's to me!

Pete_W
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6 posted 2015-11-30 11:24 AM


Your borrowed light is illuminating.
Thanks
Pete

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