»
Archives
»
Open Poetry #49
»
Fragile Memories
| Open Poetry #49 |
|
Fragile Memories |
|
|
secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! 
|
Fragile Memories The tentative moon rides an infinite field of frosted stars. A lonely cloud roams the boundless sky. Twilight shadows dance with the echoes of Time to Winter’s tune. This late Autumn world of ‘endless’ hills hangs on the cusp of change. There are so many strange and lovely things that we may never know. In this life of fragile memories, which should not exist the one who forgets or the one forgotten? --- b. e. adams (11/24/2015) |
||
| © Copyright 2015 Bruce E. Adams Jr. - All Rights Reserved | |||
|
jjote Senior Member
since 2002-12-25
Posts 1088Ontario, Canada |
Beauty of nature surrounds us, we live such "busy" lives, we forget to take notice, and all this become fragile memories. Your question begs for deeper thought, both both sides need their place in our memories |
||
|
secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
thank you for your comment/reply post on this ever-so-humble lil' "poetic scribble!" |
||
|
Ticklefingers Senior Member Posts 710 Louisiana |
quote: Fine lines you draw here SHDP. 88's friend She told me "play one for your supper Danny and maybe you'll get breakfast". |
||
|
Pete_W Member Posts 185 Scotland (UK) |
Sometimes it's a mercy to forget or be forgotten, so I'd answer neither but that's just me. As always, very thought provoking. Maybe be mindful of lines or fragment's you've used in other poems. Thanks Pete |
||
|
Namyh Senior Member
since 2009-01-20
Posts 988 |
secondhandpoet - Fragile memories! Where would we mere mortals be without them. Thanks for sharing. Namyh |
||
|
secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
Many thanks to each and all of you for your comment/reply postings on this ever-so-humble lil' "poetic scribble!" ... |
||
|
JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
like this...james |
||
|
rainyday Member Posts 304 Heartland USA |
shdreampoet, I'm afraid I don't have the answer, just know this write has a dreamy quality to it, which I enjoyed. [This message has been edited by rainyday (11-28-2015 11:53 PM).] |
||
|
secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
thank you, lovely lady ... for your comment/reply post on this 'write!' |
||
|
secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
Thank you also, JM ! |
||
|
Mr Martini Member Posts 366 Beneath The Line |
As I began to read your fine poem Mr. Adams, I quickly hovered when reading of the "tentative moon". "Hovering", because of our own existence being indeed, "tentative", and what that means beyond this physical plane never seems to get past theorizing. It is the direct antithesis of "eternal", which the moon certainly is not. As you say, "there are so many strange and lovely things that we may never know", I would say, "there are so many strange and lovely people I have known". Some of them, like yourself, are here. au revoir mon amie Here's to you and here's to me and should we ever disagree, here's to me! |
||
|
latearrival Member Ascendant
since 2003-03-21
Posts 5499Florida |
Once someone has entered your heart for what ever reason or however long, they are not forgotten.Lovely words again Bruce, Jo |
||
|
secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
Thanks so much "Mr. Martini" and Jo ! |
||
|
|
⇧ top of page ⇧ |
|
| All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format. | ||
