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JamesMichael
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0 posted 2015-11-13 09:34 PM



Precious Joys


My friend
when she hugs me
she holds me like the wind,
she caresses me
and touches me
like I'm a special friend,

upon windy days
I am reminded of her
every time I see the motion
and hear the sounds
of the coconut fronds
blowing in the winds
and the branches and
leaves of the trees
moving around,

this all becomes
a beautiful show
of nature coming down,
another place where grace
and precious joys
can be found.


JamesLee
11/13/15


  



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rainyday
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1 posted 2015-11-14 01:27 AM


JM, So true..there is much grace found in nature, also liked your comparison of the hugs with the wind.
Margherita
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2 posted 2015-11-14 09:31 AM


Very beautiful, dear James, you are immersed in love and harmony.

Margherita

Namyh
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3 posted 2015-11-14 04:24 PM


James - Ahh yes, a hug in the wind. I remember it so well. Thanks for the memory and I'm feeling much better for it. Namyh

[This message has been edited by Namyh (11-14-2015 08:56 PM).]

jjote
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4 posted 2015-11-14 08:55 PM


so precious and dear are fond memories of past loves, and sometimes they too are gone with the wind.
Pete_W
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5 posted 2015-11-15 05:23 PM


"My friend
when she hugs me
she holds me like the wind,"
What a wonderful image, much feeling.
Pete

JamesMichael
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6 posted 2015-11-16 08:46 PM


Thank you rainyday, Margherita, Namyh, jjote and Pete for the nice response...james
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