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jjote
Senior Member

since 2002-12-25

Posts 1088
Ontario, Canada

0 posted 2015-11-10 11:48 PM

A prism of shadows trails
behind me, as foreboding
as a moonlit silhouette
sanding off the sharp edges
of evening - sleep eludes me
vestiges of fever dreams
with persistent monsters slink
around windmills of my mind
A streak of dawn sun at last
appears to lighten the sky
creating a world without
the intrusion of crazed dreams

I go search for solitude
to slake my own loneliness.

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

1 posted 2015-11-11 05:25 AM

Dear Josefina, powerful and impressive words here from you, the night seems to never end when there are those "fever dreams" ...

To further slake your loneliness at this time, go to the Forum "Spiritual Journeys" and read again your wonderful poem "God's Quiet", which JamesMichael brought back to the top. You will remember and immerse in serenity.

Love and hugs.
Margherita

"Love is the One who masters all things;
I am mastered totally by Love."
(Rumi)

JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

2 posted 2015-11-11 08:50 AM

So well done is this poem of shadows and monsters which beckon us with nighttime thoughts and fears.

~*~ When they give you ruled paper write sideways. ~*~

latearrival
Member Ascendant

since 2003-03-21

Posts 5499
Florida

3 posted 2015-11-11 07:22 PM

Beautifully written. Thanks for this poem, it sends thoughts along with it for me to ponder.
jo

jjote
Senior Member

since 2002-12-25

Posts 1088
Ontario, Canada

4 posted 2015-11-11 07:42 PM

Thanks Margherita, Jerry and Jo. So glad to come back again to this forum, miss you and all your thought which inspire me to go on posting.

jjote
Senior Member

since 2002-12-25

Posts 1088
Ontario, Canada

5 posted 2015-11-12 02:12 AM

Hi Margherita, I did go to Spiritual Journey and I have my comment there also. Yes, it's time to be reminded again of what I felt when I wrote that.. Thanks

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

6 posted 2015-11-12 09:39 PM

Music seems to awaken my mind when I am lonely...James

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