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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity 
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 * Motionless I stand in the sun nature holds its breath the trees stop to hum the melody of the breeze, exhausted bees fall asleep within charming corollas. Silence spreads its cover over all source of dissonance. Soul sounds start to carry me softly. Sunrays seek me out dancing around me like golden flames, worshipping and awakening the sunchild that slumbers within my core. I am ready to drift off into the land of dreams where I walk blissfully hand in hand with you. My eyes close to the world around me, they open to the vastness of your cosmic attraction. Your eyes are the portals to unknown heavenly prairies, with horizons of starlight and new itineraries of love to explore. I break my chains matter loses its hold on me my feet obey to the pull of the sky, unbound and free, wings in place, I set off to fly across the spheres of pure harmony. Spellbound by You! * |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
"and new itineraries of love to explore." . . . Yesss! These two lines are the breakthrough into this fabulous poem, Margherita! The lines, combined with the magnificent photo you have shared are perfect together. Letting yourself go enough to clasp a lover's hand (either real or from memory) and allow the sun access to you and yours is something very, very precious! ~*~ When they give you ruled paper write sideways. ~*~ |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Wow! Beautiful as usual, my friend and the last (major) stanza - just perfect. j. |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Thank you so much, dear Jerry, for your generous comment. You actually pointed out exactly what inspired me to write this poem ... an incredibly intense emotion in a recent dream where I "walked hand in hand" with someone ... "precious"!  And also the scene in full sunshine was real, as well as the related feelings. Margherita Now a song comes to mind "In dreams" by Roy Orbison https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=TPqZs7Vl_xg |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Thank you kindly, dear Jimmy, for your most loving comment! I am glad I followed my inspiration today. When we postpone, often we miss an opportunity to "listen to our hearts". Margherita |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Love that song, love anything by that singer, Margarita. ~*~ When they give you ruled paper write sideways. ~*~ |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Me too, Jerry! |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
A beautiful flow...james |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
hello Margherita, you are on true communion with love and nature, this is a real solace to read your words saring the great harmon and bringing peace, thanks for the beautiful share yann |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
"Soul sounds start to carry me softly. Sunrays seek me out dancing around me" Always the soft of you strikes my heart. Bless you. |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Thank you so much, dear James, for your loving comment. We are "in the flow" as long as love and life "move" together, that's the key of harmony. Dear Yann, thank you for your kind reply. I especially enjoyed that you found "solace" in reading my words, that's a great reaction indeed. Dear Karilea, to touch your heart is a perfect pleasure. The soft of US always wants to surface, despite "upstream struggles" ... Thank you so much! Love, Margherita "Love is the One who masters all things; |
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rainyday Member Posts 304 Heartland USA |
M, What a Beautiful journey you take the reader on. The last stanza bringing pure freedom & contentment. Enjoyed.. rainyday J |
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Constance Member
since 2001-07-28
Posts 393Ohio |
This lovely piece is as soft as a sleeping sigh. Very, very nice, Margherita. smiles, toes |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Thank you very kindly, for your loving comments, dear J. and dear Constance. You brought a smile into this rainy day! Love, Margherita "Love is the One who masters all things; |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
Everything about this is just beautiful Margherita. Ida |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Beautiful photo, fits your words so well Margherita. Love this verse... My eyes close to the world around me, they open to the vastness of your cosmic attraction. Your eyes are the portals to unknown heavenly prairies, with horizons of starlight and new itineraries of love to explore. That's really getting into an open peaceful space! true love never looks after it's own interests |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Once again, dear Ida and dear Eric, I am smiling and thank you both for your kind and generous replies. I actually thought this was not the page of today! But I see Ida has enjoyed diving and bringing up again these two poems of some time ago. Thank you! Love and joy. Margherita "Forget every touch or sound that did not teach you how to dance." |
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