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Lori Grosser Rhoden
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0 posted 2015-11-04 06:49 AM




A cold front comes
The killing frost has arrived
Flowers lose their heads


LGRĀ©11/8/14

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JerryPat2
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1 posted 2015-11-04 08:03 AM


You are so good at the 5-7-5 style of poetry.

~*~ When they give you ruled paper write sideways. ~*~

Lori Grosser Rhoden
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2 posted 2015-11-04 08:21 AM


Thanks!
I enjoy it, it is a good exercise for me to get the mind in poetic focus. Good morning! ~L

Ticklefingers
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3 posted 2015-11-04 12:25 PM


Every time I hear the term 'killing frost', Michael Murphy's song 'Wildfire' floats up from the sea-bottom of my sunken memories.

Your pattern is also one I thoroughly enjoy and you construct them beautifully. That being said, I haven't yet been away from the frigid temperatures long enough to miss them, if I ever do. The so-called 'cold' here in my slice of Louisiana is a heat wave in Northern Wisconsin. I still have clothes here that Admiral Byrd would be envious of.

Good read Miss Lori.

            Now then...

                        'Put another log on the fire' woman!


88's atcha

She told me "play one for your supper Danny and maybe you'll get breakfast".

Lori Grosser Rhoden
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4 posted 2015-11-04 01:14 PM


TF
talk about bringing back memories! " Throw another log on the fire" takes me back to an old farm house we lived in that was heated by woodstove only. Talk about feezin' yer keester! I couldn't handle that today. ~L

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