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Ticklefingers
Senior Member
Posts 710
Louisiana

0 posted 2015-10-29 05:31 PM


sometimes I feel my life
is like a pinball machine
and all the bumpers are random events

5 balls for a quarter
with the hope for a
life extending bonus round


What concerns me most is playing too hard
and going 'Tilt'  before
all my balls are used up

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JerryPat2
Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975
South Louisiana
1 posted 2015-10-29 05:57 PM


Heh.Heh Wicked, Ticklefingers . . . Wicked I say.

~*~ When they give you ruled paper write sideways. ~*~

Lori Grosser Rhoden
Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere
2 posted 2015-10-29 09:10 PM


Way cool! What a way for you to view YOU.

Now that you reminded me of how I used to see me...before the deflated balloon thing...I was a sea anemone...

The anemone are rooted in place and their only source of sustenance is what ever happens to drift through their ornate tentacles.  They are at the mercy of the current. ~L


jwesley
Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563
Spring, Texas
3 posted 2015-10-30 11:15 AM


Nailed it with this piece, my friend.


j.

VAS
Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450
Oregon
4 posted 2015-10-30 12:05 PM


Delightfully"penned."

Whether on the shoal or on the shore,
I'll seek the lighthouse evermore.

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