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Lori Grosser Rhoden
Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere

0 posted 2015-10-25 07:00 AM



I am

Always in your debt
Sacrifices made for me
I am unworthy

© Copyright 2015 Lori Grosser Rhoden - All Rights Reserved
JerryPat2
Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975
South Louisiana
1 posted 2015-10-25 08:22 AM


Yes,  you are worthy, Lori.

~*~ When they give you ruled paper write sideways. ~*~

latearrival
Member Ascendant
since 2003-03-21
Posts 5499
Florida
2 posted 2015-10-26 01:22 PM


Lori I have come back twice to read this.I do not understand nor will I try.I do know that we should not feel so beholden to another if it is within  a bond of love. Love should show the way and be taken seriously. No pay backs needed because of a feeling of debt for what is given with love.Grateful yes Debt no. JMO
Jo

Ticklefingers
Senior Member
Posts 710
Louisiana
3 posted 2015-10-26 03:07 PM


beer not brewed with tears
has a bitter taste
tears doth make it sweet


                                     ...or something like that


88 left on the wall

Keep

She told me "play one for your supper Danny and maybe you'll get breakfast".

jwesley
Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563
Spring, Texas
4 posted 2015-10-27 03:13 PM


Yeah, right - bet you said that to the "wall".

Seriously, know where from you speak, my friend.  No matter what the truth that sparked the words, the truth of them will always be there, and the acknowledgement of their truth, raises you to another plane of growth.

Cool.


j.

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