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Ticklefingers
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0 posted 2015-10-25 02:35 AM


a shower of stars
two chenille bathrobes hanging
on a crescent moon

She told me "play one for your supper Danny and maybe you'll get breakfast".

© Copyright 2015 Danny - All Rights Reserved
Lori Grosser Rhoden
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since 2009-10-10
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1 posted 2015-10-25 06:11 AM


TF
Very nice! It has all my favorite things: romance, whimsy, innuendo, the moon and stars...
Kinda puts me in mind of the commercial with the man and woman in the two bath tubs.
BTW chenille bathrobes are the best! ~L

JerryPat2
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2 posted 2015-10-25 10:18 AM


I have developed a mind picture of that moon
and the hanging chenille bathrobes, plus the
two who are bathing in the moon's glow.

Excellent!



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secondhanddreampoet
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3 posted 2015-10-25 05:48 PM


v. well done !
Ticklefingers
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4 posted 2015-10-27 12:23 PM


Thanks Miss Lori!

I have two of them and a bedspread. With flannel sheets in the cooler weather, they're the best combination.


88's friend

She told me "play one for your supper Danny and maybe you'll get breakfast".

Ticklefingers
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5 posted 2015-10-27 12:24 PM


Thanks to you JerryPat!

88's friend

She told me "play one for your supper Danny and maybe you'll get breakfast".

Ticklefingers
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Posts 710
Louisiana
6 posted 2015-10-27 12:25 PM


Many thanks SHDP!


88's friend

She told me "play one for your supper Danny and maybe you'll get breakfast".

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