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RedStoneEB
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since 2003-06-08
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0 posted 2015-10-15 03:46 PM


Where do they? All these words?
Which became a vocal reminder go?
yet, beyond my mind, it is now into the next.

I know of dreams but wonder
do they come from another source?
Did they once spiral my lovers mind like
a racing heart does in its murmured beat,
do I give the pleasures of her world through mix’d
streams of desires? might then I sleep--
sleep in the burrowed covers, in the thickest blanket
away from the cold-- away from sound, and the
whisper of reality.

Do I grow from this fabric, like life from the soil--
first seeking out the warmth of that which I cannot see.

I grew from such experiences-- mythical in my deeds’
for haven’t we all slain the dragons in the books we read--
or trembled at the choices left before those brave knights,
not such that a child's mind would understand, but in aging
do we see the darker notes of choice, one where you choose
who dies and lives, one where you go and leave behind a now
far away land, never really grasping as a child, but as a child
seeking out adventure, onwards! onwards!

And nearer, and nearer,
till the cross upon the dirt marks its spot and we dig--
dig deep-- for that is part of a understanding, first having
to dig-- then go deeper, into the realm of our being--
and float like leaves upon the surface of water,
been taken to and fro, side to side, till we either sink
or land of different shores’ Methought it so.

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Ticklefingers
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Louisiana
1 posted 2015-10-15 05:29 PM


The randomness of life does provide its own stimulus. Whether we 'float like a leaf upon the waters' or skim across the bottom once we've sunk, it's still a 'trip' for as long as we're aware of it.

Enjoyed the poetry friend.


88's

She told me "play one for your supper Danny and maybe you'll get breakfast".

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
2 posted 2015-10-20 10:44 PM


very nice writing...james
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