Open Poetry #49 |
Desperately |
Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
Its desperation that makes me love you Desperation and a skin hunger so deep its almost devastating I fight this...oh how I fight this ...senseless love I count all the reasons we will fail Making little checkmarks on my heart for each reason Yet every day you are here loving me gently With your childlike love that sees no flaws, no faults, ...innocence personified Still I ache when we are apart desperate, needy, doubtful...love And at the end of the day my heart brushes off the checkmarks Brushes off the doubts, the fears the lonely tears And I just love you...desperately |
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Ticklefingers Senior Member Posts 710 Louisiana |
Warm and heartfelt poetry Miss Paula. To me, these lines I quote from your writing are reason enough to look past the 'desperation': quote: Lovely writing from lovely feelings. 88's to the full She told me "play one for your supper Danny and maybe you'll get breakfast". |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
Its exactly why I look past my demons when it comes to love...and him. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
"With your childlike love that sees no faults." This trait is valuable...james |
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