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Lori Grosser Rhoden
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since 2009-10-10
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0 posted 2015-10-09 10:38 AM




Taking a bite of death
and the taste is sweet upon my lips,
forever staying with me
as dimples on my hips.
The smell of pastry is strong upon my breath.
Traces of frosting glitter me.
Ah, the pleasure in pleasuring me.
Sweets for the sweet make me high.
Don’t go and spoil it by measuring me.
Of embarrassment I’d rather not die.

LGR©10/9/15


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JerryPat2
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since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975
South Louisiana
1 posted 2015-10-09 11:05 AM


Heh.Heh 'Nuff said!

~*~ When they give you ruled paper write sideways. ~*~

Ticklefingers
Senior Member
Posts 710
Louisiana
2 posted 2015-10-09 01:09 PM


"Pastry is tastry", the poets' say.

Never enjoy them within 50 feet of a tape measure!

       (***makes a dash for prune danish***).


Clever writing Miss Lori!
88's with sugar on top

She told me "play one for your supper Danny and maybe you'll get breakfast".

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
3 posted 2015-10-09 07:20 PM


Nice writing...I know you have too balance sweets with healthy...james
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