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Ticklefingers
Senior Member
Posts 710
Louisiana

0 posted 2015-10-04 03:56 AM

May of the morning...

Rises to become my sun
Window-box flowers sing to your smile
That gives light to their petals
And life to their delicate leaves
Rooms filled with airs about you
A gift that transcends the time
That I beg to spend close by you
Now that I've found you again

May of the evening...

Glows in radiance as my lovers' moon
Tides move quietly from the shore
Whispering her name on gentle breakers
Her silvery lace flows with southern compliments
As she fills my spirit and refreshes my soul
Long will be the night she promises
And we two to know its pleasures
'Til the sun wakes the sleeping flowers once again

She told me "play one for your supper Danny and maybe you'll get breakfast".

Michael

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Member Rara Avis

since 1999-08-13

Posts 7666
California

1 posted 2015-10-04 11:55 AM

What a splendid weave to wake up to this morning. Beautifully written... and I could sense the *draw felt. Just lovely.

Michael

JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

2 posted 2015-10-04 12:27 PM

Ahhh . . . Such a beautiful piece of poetical writing, Ticklefingers.
The whole poem was written so smoothly
each line merged into the next line effortlessly.

~*~ When they give you ruled paper write sideways. ~*~

Ticklefingers
Senior Member
Posts 710
Louisiana

3 posted 2015-10-04 01:41 PM

Thanks so much Michael and JerryPat. I sure do appreciate your visit to 'Miss May'.

88's friends

She told me "play one for your supper Danny and maybe you'll get breakfast".

secondhanddreampoet
Member Ascendant

since 2006-11-07

Posts 6394
a 'Universalist' !

4 posted 2015-10-04 08:13 PM

I'm always really amazed at how many different writing styles the various poets
have who traverse these fine blue sands of "P.I.P.-land by the cyber-sea! ...

A particularly fine line!:

"Her silvery lace flows with southern
compliments"

Ticklefingers
Senior Member
Posts 710
Louisiana

5 posted 2015-10-05 03:59 AM

Thank you for such a nice reply. I very much admire your poetry SHDP and value your visits a great deal.

88's friend.

She told me "play one for your supper Danny and maybe you'll get breakfast".

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