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Open Poetry #49

Letting You Go

Lori Grosser Rhoden
Member Patricius

since 2009-10-10

Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere

0 posted 2015-09-29 07:01 AM

You are dead and gone
Pain lives on inside of me
Forgive you, free me

[This message has been edited by Lori Grosser Rhoden (09-29-2015 11:36 AM).]

JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

1 posted 2015-09-29 07:50 AM

Ahhh. . . That can be taken many ways.

~*~ When they give you ruled paper write sideways. ~*~

Ticklefingers
Senior Member
Posts 710
Louisiana

2 posted 2015-09-29 12:59 PM

Last line...

exactly.

A powerful lesson for life.

88's

She told me "play one for your supper Danny and maybe you'll get breakfast".

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

3 posted 2015-09-29 11:30 PM

when we can come to the road of forgiveness that is the beginning of letting go...james

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