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JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

0 posted 2015-09-24 08:30 PM



Angel Lips

Shall her kiss
touch my lips,
nothing as nice
as angel lips.

Until you
kiss me
I can't
kiss you.

Kiss me,
think of me,
miss me,
make a dream
come true.

Kiss me
as I'm
kissing
you.

JamesLee
9/23/15


  

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Ticklefingers
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Posts 710
Louisiana
1 posted 2015-09-24 09:36 PM


Lyrical and pleasing read.


88's friend.

She told me "play one for your supper Danny and maybe you'll get breakfast".

2islander2
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since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825
by the sea
2 posted 2015-09-25 11:03 AM


a warm read like a charm, thanks


yann



JamesMichael
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3 posted 2015-09-25 10:16 PM


thank you Ticklefingers and 2islander2 for the nice responses...james
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