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JamesMichael
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0 posted 2015-09-11 10:15 PM


As the Deer

In the forest
upon the mountain
all is well,
for the rain is plentiful
and the streams are lively
and the ponds are all overflowing;
and all the animals in the forest
have plenty to eat and drink
and grow strong and live healthy,
while in yonder meadow
longings are being satisfied
this very moment
as the deer
quenches his
thirst...

JamesLee
9/11/15

"As the deer longs
for the water
so my soul
longs for You.
I'm gonna live my Life.
I'm gonna live my Life.
for Yeshua."
Words by Joshua James
from "Beauty in Motion" CD
Theme song from "Discovering
the Jewish Jesus."


  

  

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The Lady
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The Southwest
1 posted 2015-09-17 10:02 PM




I like the mood, James.

The Lady
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2 posted 2015-09-17 10:03 PM



I like your mood, James.

JamesMichael
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3 posted 2015-09-17 10:21 PM


Thank you The Lady, the song by Joshua James is beautiful and creates a mood in those who listen...James
Mary Ann
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since 2003-04-23
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4 posted 2015-09-19 08:19 AM


This is beautiful and reminds me of another hymn (one of my favorites)..it has a lovely piano accompaniment..

"As the deer panteth for the water
So my soul longeth after Thee
You alone are my heart's desire
And I long to worship thee".
(M. Nystrom)


2islander2
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by the sea
5 posted 2015-09-20 03:17 AM


si splendid, i very like the mood too
yann



JamesMichael
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6 posted 2015-09-22 09:09 PM


thank you Mary Ann and 2islander2 for the nice response...james
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