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Open Poetry #49

A walk in the park

jjote
Senior Member

since 2002-12-25

Posts 1088
Ontario, Canada

0 posted 2015-09-02 06:41 AM

A riot of colors blinds me in their wonder
fall decks the park with dazzling yellows and cool greens
lush crimsons thriving in sun's embrace
pale lilacs are young lovers impassioned in rapture.
sun's warmth cuddles babies in their strollers
I stroll enchanted, though lost around winding trails
I wish I could be an artist dabbling in my easel
inventing new tints, coloring myself purple.

J.J.thomas
Member
Posts 84

1 posted 2015-09-02 08:58 AM

The images you create are so vivid! wonderful write

JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

2 posted 2015-09-02 09:48 AM

"I wish I could be an artist dabbling in my easel
inventing new tints, coloring myself purple."

You are that artist, jjote, as you paint the fall colors your own vividness.

~*~ When they give you ruled paper write sideways. ~*~

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

3 posted 2015-09-03 12:03 PM

enjoyed reading this...james

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