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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana 
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her fabulous eyes found my curious soft hazel orbs tangoed by sweetness her concealed halo made her blush she stared me down with a velvet purr her eyes did promise me her thankful ©July 28, 2012 / Jerry Pat Bolton ~*~ When they give you ruled paper write sideways. ~*~ |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
I really like it when you use this style. I enjoyed this poem very much my friend. ~L |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Thank you, Lori. ~*~ When they give you ruled paper write sideways. ~*~ |
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s1nfully_1nn0c3nt Senior Member
since 2003-10-26
Posts 1105Watertown, NY |
She must've had lovely eyes  Enjoyed.-Trina |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Heh.Heh Yes, s1nfully_1nn0c3nt, (used to know your name but have forgotten) she did have lovely hazel eyes to drown in and I proceeded down that path . . . Thank you for stopping by. Okay, now I see your name. Forgive me, Trina, I missed it. ~*~ When they give you ruled paper write sideways. ~*~ [This message has been edited by JerryPat2 (08-30-2015 08:51 PM).] |
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J.J.thomas Member Posts 84 |
I enjoyed that very much. I love how your poetry takes me away for a time. thank you |
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jjote Senior Member
since 2002-12-25
Posts 1088Ontario, Canada |
hmm, waxing romantic again...good. |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Happy you find my work in tune with your own thoughta, J.J. ~*~ When they give you ruled paper write sideways. ~*~ |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Yeah, jjote, I can't stay away from the romantic in me, thank you. ~*~ When they give you ruled paper write sideways. ~*~ |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
nice to read...james |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Thanks James. ~*~ When they give you ruled paper write sideways. ~*~ |
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