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Phantom of my love (pantoum)
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Phantom of my love (pantoum) |
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jjote Senior Member
since 2002-12-25
Posts 1088Ontario, Canada 
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I watch the sundown overtake my dreams, as my thoughts shape into memories of him. the ghosts of my love melt into the moonbeams I spread my arms to fly to the ocean rim. As my thoughts shape into memories of him, I feel the touch of his hand pressing mine. I spread my arms to fly to the ocean rim. to dance with him and toast to love’s fine wine. I feel the touch of his hand pressing mine the music of the waves calls for us, to dance with him and toast to love’s fine wine. toppling down sandcastles with no fuss. The music of the waves calls for us, I dream of walking free above the waters toppling down sandcastles with no fuss sail into the sunset beyond all borders. I dream of walking free above the waters the ghosts of my love melt into the moonbeams sail into the sunset beyond all borders. as I watch the sundown overtake my dreams --@jjote |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
When sundown overshadows your dreams, ghosts indeed will rise to the forefront of your thoughts. So much so that you fantasize to such an extent that you can actually walk on water in eager pursuit of you lovers' ghost. ~*~ When they give you ruled paper write sideways. ~*~ |
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devina Member Elite
since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539Cali |
Oh and Myy.. this is hushing gorgeous, m'lady..who conquered pantoum! "the ghosts of my love melt into the moonbeams" ~fav of all, such a strong emotion evoking line. lovely essence here J.. be well, ~d "..But a tyrant spell has bound me, |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
enjoyed...james |
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