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Fabiani
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Mesa, Az

0 posted 2015-07-08 11:01 AM


Words are leaking out and all theese smiles that i crack are a dam on the verge of colapse

there aint no turningback

i cant retrached statements without water displacement.

Water drips in steel tubs thud fleeting resonance

Feeling familair familiar pressence like pressure immeasurable

Falling in my subconscious eye reeling in vertigo

Cut the syntax and signs im defined by whats behind my eyes

So i stare into the abyss until the abyss blinks and feeling rise to the suface as pinpricks

Majick tradition trading tregedy for apathy rapidly

Tapping me psyphoning marrow through narrow filaments

Trying to recall back to what i said wait... uhh isnt what i meant

Til i forget to remember the arrogance of self-confidence in repentance ungrounded and misfounded.

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JerryPat2
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1 posted 2015-07-08 12:34 PM


Eh . . . You've completely lost me here. Sorry . . .

~*~ When they give you ruled paper write sideways. ~*~

Fabiani
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since 2006-05-12
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Mesa, Az
2 posted 2015-07-09 05:29 PM


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