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The Rose
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The Rose |
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anya Member
since 2002-07-27
Posts 393London, UK |
Standing tall and proud, like a queen before her court, petals fall, crown lost. |
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devina Member Elite
since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539Cali |
I enjoyed the beautiful image here, so somber yet poignant, as life can sometimes be! be well  ~d "..But a tyrant spell has bound me, |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Nice haiku, with dizzying heights of the beautiful blooming rose to the death and the losing her the crown. Yes! ~*~ When they give you ruled paper write sideways. ~*~ |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
suc a lovely picture, temporality of the rose all around the words, so lovely yann |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Succinct and beautiful in image. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
nice...james |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
Might the rose be Anne Boleyn? Definitely a sad ending, almost every weekday I watch roses bloom gloriously then fade and fall. You've definitely stayed true to the form with that unexpected twist at the end. I wonder why it was so unexpected, it's the life of a rose, succinctly. Whether on the shoal or on the shore, |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Life in all its' glory - fading gracefully. Well done, my friend. j. |
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