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Open Poetry #49

I Wish to be Final

Fabiani
Member

since 2006-05-12

Posts 123
Mesa, Az

0 posted 2015-06-09 12:34 PM

I found nothing, no person, no place, no placation under the plot I picked in the graveyard.

Beneath a mighty Oak burn my flesh and bone, return me to carbon.

Spread my Reminants across the baby's brow, disperse me in soil.

Put my soul to pasture.

Accend my mind.

Bury my body.

It's time to rethink every fact that is imaginable
Survival instinct dwells in a past that is inhabitable
I happen to pull fast ones over the slow p

JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

1 posted 2015-06-09 01:29 PM

In my case it will be burn the body.

~*~ When they give you ruled paper write sideways. ~*~

Fabiani
Member

since 2006-05-12

Posts 123
Mesa, Az

2 posted 2015-06-09 01:42 PM

Im opting for a good cremation too i suppose i mean the act of speading my ash in soil would be the baby brow representing new life and pasture as well like mind body spirit, my physical below, my mental above and my timeless soul free to graze

devina
Member Elite

since 1999-10-28

Posts 3539
Cali

3 posted 2015-06-10 01:34 PM

"Spread my Remnants across the
baby's brow, disperse me in soil."

~Beautiful portrayal here, body back
to soil as it began.

I like that you've included your mind
ascension after the body is no more.
Peaceful rendition of wishes for end
of life, well put!

be wellz
~d

"..But a tyrant spell has bound me,
And I cannot, cannot go.."
~Emily Bronte
'The Night is Darkening Around Me'

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