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Deeper Then I Dreamed
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Deeper Then I Dreamed |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere 
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Our love is stronger than I thought deeper than I dreamed fuller than I fathomed a love could ever be. You have shown me what a marriage can be. We are perfectly imperfect for each other. Our faults fit so well together. Our hearts are content to have our lives spent so happily close knit. I know I can’t ever remember the date when you ask… (even though I have it tattooed on my back) Today marks year number eight out of until death do us part. So far so good… We had a hell of a start! LGR©6/9/15 |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Hah! A hell of a start, but it has been soothed over and cemented into what this poem proclaims. Love these lines . . . quote: ~*~ When they give you ruled paper write sideways. ~*~ |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
They say 3 times a charm! It just keeps getting better and better. I feel blessed. Thank you for your continued support.~L |
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devina Member Elite
since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539Cali |
"We are perfectly imperfect for each other. Our faults fit so well together." ~In awe of these lines, lil' mrs! ..without those faults you'd never get the whole of your other. Love this! Many congrats, Lori, on #8 & onward!! be wellz ~d "..But a tyrant spell has bound me, |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
Thanks Devina! We have been married only 8 yrs but known each other for thirty. We were made to be together at this time in our lives. Our fault lines would have been too big to weave together.  ~L |
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
quote:That line says it all. With expectations of "perfect" come loads of heartache... but unconditional acceptance and adoration of a person for whim they are, not whom you'd like them to be is love. Really like this one, Lori. Michael |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
enjoyed...james |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
words of love make always feel good, thanks for the touching poem yann |
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