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SilentShadow
Junior Member

since 2006-04-20

Posts 32
Fl. U.S.A.

0 posted 2015-05-21 11:50 AM

There will never be another
to fill the space I made for you

There will never be another
who loves you quite the way I do

But time is running out, slipping by
ever closer to the end

You realize what you passed by
was more than just a friend

The emptiness comes creeping in
no matter what you do

But the emptiest of any space
is the place I made for you...

SilentShadow
Junior Member

since 2006-04-20

Posts 32
Fl. U.S.A.

1 posted 2015-05-21 11:54 AM

Thank you to Balladeer and the PIP staff for helping me recover my account.

I don't post often, only when inspired, I don't sit down to write, only when it hits me,,, like a sledgehammer, but that's my style,,, sledgehammer poetry. I hope it hits you too, and resonates within you~~
SilentShadow

devina
Member Elite

since 1999-10-28

Posts 3539
Cali

2 posted 2015-05-21 12:06 PM

This definitely does resonate..
and then just aches in the emptiness on ending.

well done!
~d

"..But a tyrant spell has bound me,
And I cannot, cannot go.."
~Emily Bronte
'The Night is Darkening Around Me'

JerryPat2
Member Laureate

since 2011-02-06

Posts 16975
South Louisiana

3 posted 2015-05-21 02:30 PM

This is very good, I feel the emptiness . . .

~*~ When they give you ruled paper write sideways. ~*~

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

4 posted 2015-05-22 10:28 PM

nice writing...james

Southernfury
New Member
Posts 5

5 posted 2015-07-23 10:09 AM

This breaks my heart :'( because i know why you wrote it

Southernfury
New Member
Posts 5

6 posted 2015-07-23 11:03 PM

One day love that emptiness will be filled... but a hauntingly beautiful way to describe the feeling

latearrival
Member Ascendant

since 2003-03-21

Posts 5499
Florida

7 posted 2015-07-24 09:25 AM

Understanding and feeling for your loss.

latearrival

jjote
Senior Member

since 2002-12-25

Posts 1088
Ontario, Canada

8 posted 2015-07-28 11:04 PM

It takes a lot of courage to bare out your soul, especially the pain of loss and emptiness. Even when people say you should move on, inside you still want to cling to the memories. Nice write.

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