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A Climatic Day
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A Climatic Day |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana 
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what a beautiful end to a gorgeous May day bright sunshine, nice stiff breeze air so clean smelling almost as sweet as her perfume this day is the perfect one to come after our intermingling last night so maybe there were problems unforeseen, never mind last night it was still, a night to remember for me which brings me back to this breathtaking Mayday what more could a man ask for a lovely woman the way she makes him feel and the beauty of today the exclamation point to a just-what-the-doctor-ordered day to end all days I am blessed ©May 16, 2015 / Jerry Pat Bolton ~*~ When they give you ruled paper write sideways. ~*~ |
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devina Member Elite
since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539Cali |
you've got it bad Jerry  bad equals a sigh to that exclamation-point day you've captured in this piece! lovitt! ~T "...But a tyrant spell has bound me, |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Yes, devina, I've got it bad and that is good. Thank you. ~*~ When they give you ruled paper write sideways. ~*~ |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
Good for you my friend, good for you!!! Nothing like spring in the air when you got a spring in your step. ~L |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Hah! Yeah, still have some spring in my step, Lori, unbelievable, even to me, and I am very grateful. Thank y-o-o-u for stopping by. ~*~ When they give you ruled paper write sideways. ~*~ |
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Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
love the soft texture to this one, Jer. Something I may not have been able to appreciate much in the past, but definitely seeing it through different eyes now. Michael |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
I am happy to hear that you are able to understand and appreciate the "soft texture" of my little poem, Michael . . . ~*~ When they give you ruled paper write sideways. ~*~ |
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