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2islander2
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0 posted 2015-05-19 09:00 AM



At night foggier than Fog of London,
I have no heart to listen to some music,
The quiet discotheques where the mind collapses
Could not offer me an erotic meal,

Everything is question of vapors in blackness,
Spaghettis crawl in kitchens,
Then rise in your hopeless head,
Your pale knots make them feminine.

We do not know how to sleep any more with rich rhymes,
Then we watch TV which puts to sleep you,
Fortunately broadcast the dolce Vita which cheats.
Fellini moved your ideas as one golden slat.

In fact the life is a personal thing,
It is necessary to choose the eyes which look at you,
It is necessary to get rid of ideas of others,
To like breasts, Porto and coffees.

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devina
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1 posted 2015-05-19 10:17 AM



"..In fact the life is a personal thing.."
~YEP. he managed to stay married throughout life, kudos there!

and...
"..We do not know how to sleep any more with rich rhymes.."
~big hug, 'cuz you noticed too!   that earthy feel of his was always greatly incorporated to film.

perfect ode to start my morning Yann!
~d



"...But a tyrant spell has bound me,
And I cannot, cannot go...
~Emily Bronte
'The Night is Darkening Around Me'

Margherita
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2 posted 2015-05-19 07:17 PM


Dear Yann, you have outdone yourself with this hymn to life, fellinian style. You are just very captivatingly creative in your own personal way.

Excellent.

Margherita

jwesley
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3 posted 2015-05-19 10:03 PM


Wow!  Loved the way you did this.  Nailed it my friend.


j.

2islander2
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4 posted 2015-05-20 01:02 AM


thanks devina, I didn't know about Fellini Mariages, genius have some contradiction, do what i say, not what i do, thanks for the delicieoux comment again
yann



2islander2
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5 posted 2015-05-20 01:04 AM


thanks a lot Margherita, the film was outsanding nut long (3 hours), ot was chot in Roma and i am always fascinated by this city in the 60ies, i appreciate you loved the poem
yann

2islander2
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6 posted 2015-05-20 01:05 AM


thanks a lot jwesley for the supportive comment

have a nice day

yann



JamesMichael
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7 posted 2015-05-22 10:27 PM


enjoyed...james
2islander2
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8 posted 2015-05-23 12:28 PM


thanks james

yann

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