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devina Member Elite
since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539Cali 
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Silent is this eve, in drips of sun's last ray. I sit lonesome in a field, n' watch upon the fade. Night should come, on wings of quick, I demand this dark, in spit and fits. Wanna wade on hollow, but doesn't feel quite right- Something beats a rhythm, beckoning my midnight. I sense a heart so kindred, distant but familiar- needing two, just like me. (so very...similar?) I'll wander far and farther, to reach this other part- and sink in vast completion, solid linked, like puzzle-art. "...But a tyrant spell has bound me, And I cannot, cannot go... ~Emily Bronte 'The Night is Darkening Around Me' [This message has been edited by devina (05-17-2015 10:47 PM).] |
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Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
I really like this one, Tanya. Feeling that *draw. Makes for a beautiful image when all the pieces fit just right.  Michael |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Your last two lines took me on a ride . . . ~*~ When they give you ruled paper write sideways. ~*~ |
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VAS Member Rara Avis
since 2000-11-16
Posts 7450Oregon |
At the beginning I sense that your eve was much like my morning this day; weather has its way. Your last line, priceless toward "puzzle art." Like that image. Whether on the shoal or on the shore, |
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devina Member Elite
since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539Cali |
Michael- Yep, feeling that draw and mushin'...in pieces recently connected, and perfectly- at that! huggs, you! Jerry-zooms are good for you man! thanx hun! Virginia- thank you, those pieces build a beautiful picture for my hungry eyes, puzzle aside even! take care!  ~ mushy T "...But a tyrant spell has bound me, |
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