Open Poetry #49 |
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devina Member Elite
since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539Cali |
Can't deem a thought- your lips won't spill, Don't want to pry- but know I will. I soft-hand hold you, lift your lid- Silence astounds, A soul. In bid! "Sides are warring- strike 'em back... Don't bow down to heart's attack!" "Small-box your fears, and stand erect- I"ll shoulder you," so circumspect. "I'll grow your whim- and spin it gold, Give you his heart- if you're so bold, to spend so many years in-hold." Just judge not- I tried to help- don't think him much, (not near enough) to be the One you're meant to love. Vernacular fails... I sense defeat, You've tapped your heart, and crave the bleed... I'll blend in wind, my dearest friend- ~Honesty Slays~ ...on seethe and cringe I exit stage. "...But a tyrant spell has bound me, And I cannot, cannot go... ~Emily Bronte 'The Night is Darkening Around Me' [This message has been edited by devina (05-15-2015 08:41 PM).] |
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
Great title. Caught the play on words there. I know you feel *defeated, but you stood up where many would have just stood quietly and watched. There is victory enough in just that, but that you did it out of love and concern will never be forgotten on the other end I am sure. You have a beautiful heart, Tanya. Mine aches for yours right now. Michael |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Absolutely love the last two lines, Devina. Much soul sharing within the framework of this sad piece of work. Eh . . . A shame to say, but we must do what we must to do when certain misfortunes happens to us. This was well written, one of, if not the, best I have been fortunate to read of yours. ~*~ When they give you ruled paper write sideways. ~*~ |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
hi devina, this is a very sensitive gift, i love the words, like giving your very soul in offrand, but there is like some misunderstanding, and then refusal,the words are great to express that, and the sadness they convey, yann |
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devina Member Elite
since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539Cali |
Michael- and knew you would, with title and knowing me.G's *huggs fer making me feel not-so mean about it. Still wonder if it's alright to pry, when you know better, but love too much? hmmm. get back to you Jerry-sweet thoughts, I thank you for seeing deep inside this one. Story? I am stubborn and have few, but most-stubborn friends. lol Yann- you are so smokin' Right hun...worried this might have been confusing to some, King of Decipher you are, love it, ty! T "...But a tyrant spell has bound me, And I cannot, cannot go... ~Emily Bronte 'The Night is Darkening Around Me' [This message has been edited by Michael (05-26-2015 11:45 AM).] |
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