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2islander2
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since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825
by the sea

0 posted 2015-05-09 11:19 AM


Your heart vaster than Russia,
My heart smaller than Albania
only waiting for annexation.


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Margherita
Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236
Eternity
1 posted 2015-05-09 12:17 PM


This will make one big heart pulsating in harmony with the laws of love. I think you expressed this with brilliance. If not in politics barriers disappear in matters of love. Size will not be a problem anymore after the "annexation". Just my interpretation, dear Yann, but thank you for allowing me to envision wholeness, oneness, connection!

Love,
Margherita

devina
Member Elite
since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539
Cali
2 posted 2015-05-09 01:22 PM


Your annex-impending reads so clear here!
I enjoyed your thought process, and the spark of conclusion you lend in these lines. may the take over be ouchless

be well
~d

Open arms can be the most fragile in the world...



Marchmadness
Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271
So. El Monte, California
3 posted 2015-05-10 02:00 AM


Very clever, yann.
                Ida

jjote
Senior Member
since 2002-12-25
Posts 1088
Ontario, Canada
4 posted 2015-05-11 11:40 AM


I love these short poems, that say a lot more in so few words.It's a technique I myself find difficult to write.
short and sweetly endearing

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