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Somethin’
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Somethin’ |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere 
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Somethin’ just ain’t right with me My enthusi lost its asm . My rise and shine is down and dim. Up and at ‘em is down for the count. I’m neither bright-eyed nor bushy-tailed. My get up and go has long since went. The worms don’t miss that early bird. My eager beaver is a sullen sloth. There is no zippity in my do-da. Oh, blah gray. Oh, blah day. Somethin’ just ain’t right with me. LGR©5/1/15 |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Eh . . . Look toward the sunshine Lori, and you will be just fine ~*~ When they give you ruled paper write sideways. ~*~ |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
I have the perfect cure, Lori! Just read your poem! I am sure you will laugh as much as I did. That second line, especially, is a giggle-rigger if ever there was one! |
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devina Member Elite
since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539Cali |
lol...can't trust that beaver-sloth, 'cept with a cleaver.  well your do-da got me singing... have you tried... coffee in the mornin? coffee in the evenin? coffee in the afternoon?? yep thx for the smile, hope your muse fixes all!  hugs Lori ~d Open arms can be the most fragile in the world... |
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Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
I have moments like that... though they tend to last far longer than a day usually. Here's hoping your "blah" isn't nearly so stubborn. Michael |
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