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Juju
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since 2003-12-29
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In your dreams

0 posted 2015-04-28 10:55 AM


This Was Once a Lake

How many people
Overlook the water
That once covered
The valley floor
Instead of the green grass
and everything else.

Juju

-Juju

-"So you found a girl
Who thinks really deep thoughts
What's so amazing about really deep thoughts " Silent all these Years, Tori Amos

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ethome
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since 2000-05-14
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New Brunswick Canada
1 posted 2015-04-28 08:34 PM


Time moves on to create different revelations of beauty. Some within and some without.
Nicely done!

Eric

true love never looks after it's own interests

devina
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since 1999-10-28
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Cali
2 posted 2015-04-28 08:45 PM


Earthy simplicity wrapped up on a breath of fresh air lady, enjoyed

~d

Open arms can be the most fragile in the world...



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