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Juju
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since 2003-12-29
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In your dreams

0 posted 2015-04-27 01:18 PM


The top of the hill

I was envious
Of that valley of green grass
For every scar
And eroded landscape
was concealed
from a distance.

-Juju

-"So you found a girl
Who thinks really deep thoughts
What's so amazing about really deep thoughts " Silent all these Years, Tori Amos

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JerryPat2
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1 posted 2015-04-27 04:44 PM


Heh.Heh Yeah, I can dig it . . . Still, we have ways to conceal our appearance when needed.

~*~ When they give you ruled paper write sideways. ~*~

Michael
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2 posted 2015-04-27 06:35 PM


...and it's what we don't see that usually kills us.

Michael

jjote
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since 2002-12-25
Posts 1088
Ontario, Canada
3 posted 2015-05-12 08:09 PM


Yes, the view from the top of the hill can be so awesome, one can forget earth's flaws. And so it's true for us humans, character flaws can be concealed at first impression, we tend to see only the person as a whole.
devina
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since 1999-10-28
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Cali
4 posted 2015-05-12 08:41 PM


wrapped up tight, I can relate....

the grass is always greener fer sure

take care!
~d

Open arms can be the most fragile in the world...



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