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Permissory Moon |
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devina Member Elite
since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539Cali 
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I strive for the darkened spread- of this nights' whimsy Moon... Want Maiden wrapped around me- A shield, of earth and tune. Ever the ardent stranger- I beg of macrocosms' seed "rise up hard and tall" that I might slow-dance- 'mongst brambled-weed. Vinous and thorny, I offer sacrifice in harnessed bleed, hips pattern a salutation and kiss it to the breeze. In totality, a curse of verse I feel Her reigning down weak paroxysm in parody of granted wishing sounds. placid now, nerve in calm wounds scab into history me, on knee of wizened rock piercing slight, these tender feet. On winding path with ancient staff- 'tis been bled dry this night, Moon winks in perfect favor and scuttles out of sight. Open arms can be the most fragile in the world... [This message has been edited by Balladeer (05-01-2015 12:00 AM).] |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Oh boy! Tanya, you have penned perfection within the lines of this sensuous poem of passion and the cosmos. These lines blew me away . . . quote: I have read it three times . . . ~*~ When they give you ruled paper write sideways. ~*~ |
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Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
Well, I tried to reply to this yesterday but my hands just ended up hovering over the keyboard for some 10+ minutes. Ummm, still stuck for an appropriate response here. You painted quite the picture, that's for sure. Lovely and provocative. Reminded me a lot of the good ol' days. Michael |
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devina Member Elite
since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539Cali |
Jerry- thanks for that, I have had the jitters all week...almost Beltane...and I'm little-girl excited for the dance  Michael-exhale. pause. does taste the same. you've always seen the deep inside, with ease. lucky me 'Tis a known fact that I must stubbornly make these tedious lists and chant 'em up a bit BEFORE I celebrate on Thursday  wicked you. lol Blessed Be to you both! ~d Open arms can be the most fragile in the world... |
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Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
Posts 7666California |
Both? Oh, you mean stubborn me and stoic me. Times are tough, they have to share the same room in my head now. I want a Beltane pic btw!Michael |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
very nice...james |
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