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Lori Grosser Rhoden
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since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere

0 posted 2015-04-17 06:54 PM





My1Dennis
is more than just my password.
He is my passport.
He is my resort
when
inspiration takes a vacation
leaving me stranded
on an abandoned
island inside myself.
His love is like a ferry
sent to fetch me.
It will catch me
in my desperation.
He is like Kilimanjaro-
awesome and inspirational.
He is my love unconditional
promised with tomorrow.

LGRĀ©4/17/15


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JerryPat2
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since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975
South Louisiana
1 posted 2015-04-17 07:08 PM


Awe-inspiring, Lori, I am so happy for you . . .

~*~ When they give you ruled paper write sideways. ~*~

ethome
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since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada
2 posted 2015-04-18 06:28 AM


Beautiful tribute to a very loving situation.
Well done!

true love never looks after it's own interests

Michael
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-13
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California
3 posted 2015-04-18 02:50 PM


  Love the Kilimanjaro reference... that says it all.

Michael

EmmaRose
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since 2011-03-02
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Midwest
4 posted 2015-04-18 07:55 PM


I find a lot of strength and sincerity in your sentiment towards your 1Dennis
Lori Grosser Rhoden
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since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere
5 posted 2015-04-19 08:36 PM


Thanks everybody for so kindly commenting on my mushy stuff about the old man, it means a lot to me when his poems are well received.~L
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