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les assassins (humour)
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les assassins (humour) |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
Ce sont des assassins, Tout le monde le sait, Les américains du Texas Et ceux de Californie, Ce sont des assassins, Ils sont toujours armés Et sont sûrs d’eux, Ils ne rigolent pas Avec les sentiments, Ce sont des assassins, Ils ont inventé le coca, Le hamburger, le Milk Shake, Ce sont des serials killer, Ils assassinent la cuisine…. [This message has been edited by 2islander2 (04-17-2015 03:52 PM).] |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Inappropriate remarks removed - Ron [This message has been edited by Ron (04-20-2015 12:12 AM).] |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
i have removed the English poem, it has been misunderstod, thanks to those who will make the effort to read the french poem, it is simply humour, PLEASE DON'T TAKE IT SERIOUSLY !!!!!! |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
Je comprends complètement Yann! Je ne vois pas du tout ce qui est difficile à comprendre! Tout le monde connaît la cuisine délicieuse de la France! Et ton poème, aussi, est délicieusement comique! J’ai ri à gorge déployée! |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
merci beaucoup diana pour ton soutien, j'ai lu ton commentaire avec infiniment de plaisir, ce qui prouve qu'on peut être poète et avoir de l'humour, je ne veux pas dire du mal de certain, mais ils pourraient faire un effort , dès qu'on parle des américains ils insultent les gens, c'est tout le contraire de l'intelligence et montre bien des limites de caractère, un sujet qu'il vaut mieux (je sais que tu me comprendras), ne pas approfondir, merci beaucoup, sur un autre site, mon poème a eu beaucoup de succès, de toute façon ce n'est pas un hasard si ma muse me l'a dicté, amitiés yann _ |
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Alison 
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
Yann, I enjoy your poetry and would love you to add the English version of you poem back. I am shocked by the comment directed towards you. Alison |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
I'd like to see it too. I hardly read English let alone anything else (pretty good with babble though) And somehow I don't think Jerry's comment (I assume that's what you're referring to) was meant the way it was taken, but was meant in a (can't remember the word/phrase I'm looking for ...) "oh sheesh, did you really say that...kind of way ... more in fun than anything. But then again ... jerry is pretty direct at times...heh, heh j. |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Hamburgers and milkshakes (and my love of them) have certainly murdered my waistline! LOL I'll admit that laziness is an accessory, though... I CAN prepare meals to oooh and ahhhh over - but usually opt for the quick.  Enjoyed this! |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
thanks everyone for the supportive comments, i will continue to post some poems, i don't have hard feelinngs for noone, let's poetry rules, i tolerate everyone point of view, i am naive enough to think people nice, i want to keep it that way as long as i Can thanks again |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
Oui, tu as raison, Yann. Je te comprends complètement. Et tu m'as fait ri avec ta muse qui te l'a dicté! Amitiés Diana |
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