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JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

0 posted 2015-04-15 09:28 PM


A Love That is Mine

When she would
smile at me and
take my hand
I would melt
into her,
and when I
think of those times
I realize that
I fell in love for
the very first time
and with this love I travel
through time, a love that
lives in my heart,
a love that
is mine.

JamesLee
4/15/15


  

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jwesley
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since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563
Spring, Texas
1 posted 2015-04-15 09:35 PM


Enjoyed


j.

JerryPat2
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since 2011-02-06
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South Louisiana
2 posted 2015-04-15 09:50 PM


Liked.

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suthern
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723
Louisiana
3 posted 2015-04-17 01:38 PM


And such a love is never really gone... it lives on and whispers "remember"... even when nights have returned to lonely.
JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
4 posted 2015-04-17 10:05 PM


thank you jwesley, jerry and southern for responding...james
devina
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since 1999-10-28
Posts 3539
Cali
5 posted 2015-04-19 01:05 PM


Love the ideal of timeless emotional devotion that you've penned here!
always a pleasure to read you
be well
~d

Open arms can be the most fragile in the world...



SimplyGold
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since 2002-07-10
Posts 1453

6 posted 2015-04-20 12:18 PM


"and with this love I travel
through time,"

Thanks JM, I do too!

Lori Grosser Rhoden
Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202
Fair to middlin' of nowhere
7 posted 2015-04-20 06:22 AM


Love has "infected" your writing. There is no escaping it. You used to write about it. Now, you write with it. ~L
2islander2
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since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825
by the sea
8 posted 2015-04-20 12:02 PM


delightful, passion rules here, thanks james
yann

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