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Lori Grosser Rhoden
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0 posted 2015-04-14 10:22 AM




Cookie, cookie on the plate,
why do you antagonize my mental state?
You lie there appearing innocent and serene,
all the while being seductive and mean.
You put my senses into a haze
as you evoke my gluttonous ways.
Your many kinds are relentless.
Against all I am defenseless.
I will not hesitate,
each and every one I will annihilate.
I’ll feel the rush
with each crumb I crush
within my mouth of drool.
I have become the fool
of these concoctions of sweet,
that will be my downfall and defeat.
LGR©4/14/15

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JerryPat2
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1 posted 2015-04-14 11:16 AM


Eh . . . You already know my thoughts on the subject. The human psyche, or thought process is free to tempt fate or to go for all the gusto you can. Gusto in this sense means a cookie on your plate. Heh.Heh

~*~ When they give you ruled paper write sideways. ~*~

Juju
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In your dreams
2 posted 2015-04-14 12:03 PM


This is like the story of my life.


Juju

-Juju

-"So you found a girl
Who thinks really deep thoughts
What's so amazing about really deep thoughts " Silent all these Years, Tori Amos

Rex Allen McCoy
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Sippin a Timmy's in London
3 posted 2015-04-14 04:15 PM


What... No popcorn or rice cakes?
devina
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Cali
4 posted 2015-04-14 11:40 PM



*nodding in agreement*
White chocolate macadamian nut are very evil...and at all hours of the night!
Enjoyed this, ty

Open arms can be the most fragile in the world...



ethome
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since 2000-05-14
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New Brunswick Canada
5 posted 2015-04-15 06:34 AM


I'm going down into defeat with you my dear....yum yum yum yum!!!

It is the no calorie type I assume......come on now pretend with me on that.

true love never looks after it's own interests

EmmaRose
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6 posted 2015-04-15 08:26 PM


yum yum
me want cookie

suthern
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7 posted 2015-04-17 01:35 PM


LOLOLOL - know this too well! LOL
Michael
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8 posted 2015-04-18 03:28 PM


haha... laughing my butt off here.  Could feel that teasing, that temptation.  

Michael

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