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Rex Allen McCoy
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Sippin a Timmy's in London

0 posted 2015-04-12 11:02 AM



~~~
Wondering why I think of you

Is it
the softness of your lips

The gentle
caress of fingers
teasing every hair and fibre

The sweetness of smile
or eyes
that encircle my deepest thoughts
while my heart

R E T U N E S
to the key of your sultry voice

~ IF ~
emotion runs rampant

Explosion
surely follows

and there's no room for logic
since

you fill my every thought
~~~

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JerryPat2
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1 posted 2015-04-12 11:23 AM


Yep, I'd say it was all the above and much, much more . . . Luv . . . Ain't it super?

~*~ When they give you ruled paper write sideways. ~*~

Rex Allen McCoy
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Sippin a Timmy's in London
2 posted 2015-04-12 11:34 AM


Wind right up and drive that nail home Jerry
latearrival
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3 posted 2015-04-12 06:50 PM


Enjoyed these thoughts. Jo
Lori Grosser Rhoden
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4 posted 2015-04-13 02:36 PM


What a joy to have a headful of such thoughts, what a gift to be able to write them down. ~L
ethome
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5 posted 2015-04-13 09:42 PM


love those last lines......well, all of it of course, but last lines tie it all together so well.

true love never looks after it's own interests

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