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secondhanddreampoet
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0 posted 2015-03-30 11:05 PM


             Your Name

Your name written on the wind
  may fall victim to the storms

Your name written in the sand
may fall victim to the waves

Your name written on the page
may fall victim to Time's decay

Your name written in my heart
   shall forever stay



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JerryPat2
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1 posted 2015-03-31 09:38 AM


Very good poetry, Bruce. Better than good actually.

~*~ When they give you ruled paper write sideways. ~*~

secondhanddreampoet
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2 posted 2015-03-31 10:00 AM


thanks, JP !
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3 posted 2015-03-31 09:28 PM


Very poignant. This makes my heart hurt a bit, Bruce.
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4 posted 2015-04-01 12:21 PM


Great writing, Bruce. Love it.
                           Ida

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5 posted 2015-04-01 10:40 AM


Truth in thought and writing... Be a friend, become a star
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6 posted 2015-04-01 02:42 PM


Thank you Alison, Ida, and Rex Allen !
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