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Rex Allen McCoy
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Sippin a Timmy's in London

0 posted 2015-03-30 09:18 PM



~~~
We shared some tears last night

Inseparable
like
Rag and Doll

Felt our anguish
slip back
on the right track

Now
the issue
seems nothing at all
~~~

© Copyright 2015 Rex Allen McCoy - All Rights Reserved
JerryPat2
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1 posted 2015-03-31 09:36 AM


The story of so many lovers, words spoken, issues resolved, until the next one show up to spoil the party. Sorry about the negativity, Rex, I guess it is because I have been down so many roads that never quite panned out. The poem was excellent . . .

~*~ When they give you ruled paper write sideways. ~*~

Rex Allen McCoy
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Sippin a Timmy's in London
2 posted 2015-03-31 09:54 AM


Thanks Jerry... I guess very few can say they walk an idealistic road in life. I've experienced the view from more than one vantage point myself
Marchmadness
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3 posted 2015-04-01 12:23 PM


We all need a happy ending now and then, Rex
and a poet to tell us about it.
                                 Ida

Sunshine
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Listening to every heart
4 posted 2015-04-10 09:46 AM


It's always good to see life reflected through your words, m'friend.
Rex Allen McCoy
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Sippin a Timmy's in London
5 posted 2015-04-10 10:23 AM


Ida... Thank you. Nice of you to say that

Karilea... I've been writing a little more lately and should be posting a little more often. Will be helping my brother start a restaurant in Little Current most of the summer. But the bar down the road has WiFi  

Lori Grosser Rhoden
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Fair to middlin' of nowhere
6 posted 2015-04-10 01:10 PM


Rex,
I like that your poem is so short and sweet. It kind of goes like that in life too.  When it comes to matters of the heart, if it gets wrenched, it is unbearable. Put things back in place again and it loves like always. And it can be quick to go either way. ~L

JamesMichael
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7 posted 2015-04-27 08:26 PM


nice writing...james
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