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Juju
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since 2003-12-29
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In your dreams

0 posted 2015-03-30 12:55 PM


Black Swan


Black Swan on a still lake
How your wake leaves small ripples
You're domain expands

Ice recedes to spring
Crystal water reflects blue sky
Soon the leaves will bloom


Juju

-Juju

-"So you found a girl
Who thinks really deep thoughts
What's so amazing about really deep thoughts " Silent all these Years, Tori Amos

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JerryPat2
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1 posted 2015-03-30 03:01 PM


Very, very pretty picture with grand expectations of nicer things to come.

~*~ When they give you ruled paper write sideways. ~*~

Rex Allen McCoy
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2 posted 2015-03-30 09:16 PM


its amazing how, as soon as there's open water. they're on it... they await spring with far more grace, beauty and patience than me
devina
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Cali
3 posted 2015-04-16 12:07 PM



This just drips of soothing and promise!
enjoyed
~d

Open arms can be the most fragile in the world...



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