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Goldenrose
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0 posted 2015-03-27 12:31 PM



Where will i find dark shadow,
now spring shines light
onto winters monochrome?
Green shades leaching from
black rippled pools,infecting
foliage with freedom verdancy.
Into woodlands of coniferous
coffin darkness,my shadow
merging with trees to leave
no human trace. Observing
summer pass overhead, like a
fiery comets ember glow,racing to
warm autumn's leaves,before
winter descends down to
engulf us, our hearts and souls,
back to whispered exaltation.

walk the moonlight path through the dark woods...i await your return..

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1 posted 2015-03-27 03:35 PM


This touches me. I love winter's contrast - darkness meeting light. But, spring!!  I am truly experiencing spring and love it. What beautiful writing, Goldenrose.

Alison

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2 posted 2015-03-29 07:34 AM


fine writing !
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