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I was cold
| Open Poetry #49 |
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I was cold |
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Juju Member Elite
since 2003-12-29
Posts 3429In your dreams 
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I was cold I've never been very smart at the game Nor do I dress properly for the weather Especially when the forecast said sleet And I only cared about impressing you... You were too into the psychology games Did figure out my flaws as I shivered? You asked me if I belonged in this era or perhaps in the past, a simpler past... "Things were not as simple in the past" but I was too afraid to say "no where" Didn't matter anyways Juju -Juju |
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Rex Allen McCoy Member Elite
since 2000-01-30
Posts 2863Sippin a Timmy's in London |
excellent piece... drifted right in and felt the frustration and loneliness. |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
Well done Juju. Much enjoyed. Ida |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
excellent work I loved the reluctant resolve. true love never looks after it's own interests |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
I feel the intensity of the ache in this excellent poem, Juju. I am sorry that you are in this position. |
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