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never leave me alone..

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thimothi
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india


0 posted 03-22-2015 01:34 PM       View Profile for thimothi   Email thimothi   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for thimothi


You bid me Good Bye
And walked away..
Leaving me behind.....
I couldn't utter a word.....
All i could do was
To shed some tears..
Each drop yelled
"Never leave me alone"
Drops were fleeting
But not my yelling..
For it still continues......
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Vincent
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1 posted 03-22-2015 01:40 PM       View Profile for Vincent   Email Vincent   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Vincent

sometimes inside says what we can`t, what we wished we had.  short and to the point, my kind of read. good work.
JerryPat2
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Welcome to PiP, thimothi . . . Your first poem I liked very much. Yes . . . Even when the teardrops stop falling, the yelling can, and sometimes does, keeps on keeping on.

~*~ When they give you ruled paper write sideways. ~*~

Lori Grosser Rhoden
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3 posted 03-22-2015 03:15 PM       View Profile for Lori Grosser Rhoden   Email Lori Grosser Rhoden   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Lori Grosser Rhoden

I like this very much as well! The ending has a haunting to it. Well done! ~L
Sunshine
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Listening to every heart


4 posted 04-10-2015 09:44 AM       View Profile for Sunshine   Email Sunshine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Sunshine's Home Page   View IP for Sunshine

Welcome to Passions in Poetry! Please check your email for a Very Special Welcome!

"The business of the poet...is to show the sorriness underlying the grandest things and the grandeur underlying the sorriest things." Thomas Hardy

Rex Allen McCoy
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Sippin a Timmy's in London


5 posted 04-10-2015 10:15 AM       View Profile for Rex Allen McCoy   Email Rex Allen McCoy   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Rex Allen McCoy's Home Page   View IP for Rex Allen McCoy

The pile of ash where your heart used to be will continue to smolder until a new seed is planted in its sted... Then, wonderful experiences begin to grow once more.

Welcome to Passions
JamesMichael
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6 posted 04-11-2015 08:47 PM       View Profile for JamesMichael   Email JamesMichael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for JamesMichael

nice writing about only having control over our own choices...james
ethome
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7 posted 04-12-2015 08:31 AM       View Profile for ethome   Email ethome   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit ethome's Home Page   View IP for ethome

very interesting way to look at it. the power of those tears is multidirectional.
jwesley
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Texas . . .


8 posted 05-21-2015 09:04 PM       View Profile for jwesley   Email jwesley   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for jwesley

Being "left" is always tough, my friend . . . but think positive . . . think of the world to come... and it will,


j.
2islander2
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9 posted 05-23-2015 12:40 AM       View Profile for 2islander2   Email 2islander2   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for 2islander2

very nice feelings, loved it


yann


devina
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10 posted 05-25-2015 08:46 PM       View Profile for devina   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for devina

This leave quite the echo m'friend, well done

"..But a tyrant spell has bound me,
And I cannot, cannot go.."
~Emily Bronte
'The Night is Darkening Around Me'

JamesMichael
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11 posted 06-16-2015 10:56 PM       View Profile for JamesMichael   Email JamesMichael   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for JamesMichael

rejection is a hard animal to face...james
thimothi
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12 posted 04-18-2017 01:22 PM       View Profile for thimothi   Email thimothi   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for thimothi

thanks a lot
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