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Richy
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0 posted 2015-03-20 07:28 PM



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A jaw of cease,
is biding time

The soft charade is
yours
and mime

The genesis of word
and debt

Is human’s greatest alpha
bet

And all the fire that
we rent

From the prison
is
consent

Kindle always
tells
a story

In the smoke of blistered
glory

Our words replay
the sighs of god

The bones of mantra
sowed
the sod

All the hue within
the mane

Rides the night mare
in
our veins

Burden me
a world of sin

Suffocate me,
in the when

You’re the payment I am dew

Color me,
the sound of you



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JerryPat2
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since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975
South Louisiana
1 posted 2015-03-20 07:43 PM


I related to parts of this, especially . . .
quote:
Rides the night mare
in
our veins

You touched on a plethora of topics. Good writing . . .

~*~ When they give you ruled paper write sideways. ~*~

Richy
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since 2003-05-03
Posts 3050

2 posted 2015-03-20 07:46 PM



thank you pal

for always being there


we appreciate you


Lori Grosser Rhoden
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since 2009-10-10
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Fair to middlin' of nowhere
3 posted 2015-03-21 06:51 AM


Richy,
What I really enjoy about your work is that your lines seem to go off on wild tangents but you always find a way to draw them back in.  Quite fascinating really!   ~L

Richy
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4 posted 2015-03-21 02:09 PM



Lori G in one sentence you just defined how i write, and how i live..

thank you for visiting

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