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Richy Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 3050
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 The more I open up my eyes I see an item of invisible Gobs of view and lumps of cold My spirit barely is, unsold Each day I leave a soft impression On the glower of the earth All the full I, didn’t fill Is the empty of my worth The stillness tries to quickly read What our pace records But the wind of history chooses What, it can afford Every gait of our achievement And, the footsteps of defeat Always go and then return As they then repeat The thoughts that choose to live with us Define who we become The feelings that we keep from others Total up, our sum I’m glad the part of you I met Is now a part of me Sharing is the only cost That can make us free |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
The thoughts that choose to live with us Define who we become wonderful write, and this, so true...and my fav of this write. |
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Richy Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 3050 |
thank you Lee J I'm glad you liked it.. have a great day  |
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EmmaRose Senior Member
since 2011-03-02
Posts 1376Midwest |
the winds bring then retake and the cycle is never ending the sharing validates what would otherwise be an empty fullness |
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Richy Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 3050 |
"the winds bring then retake and the cycle is never ending the sharing validates what would otherwise be an empty fullness" that is so sweet of you Emma to leave such a poetic reply I love it, you're the best  |
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