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Lighter then Life |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296
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If I could sing... It would be about those deep intimate connections Among the senses Implications Enhancing background sounds You know the ones, which waken beside you Sleepy eyed… All over & around... Like some invisible mist, tugging at your shores Back, back, back we once again sail To an almost familiar moment compilation of sweet tasting noise & smells Feeling some eccentric awareness Of honeyed stimulus, which parallels Can you feel it? Biting, nibbling, savoring… Immersing deep within yourself, Pause, and touch those insights thrashing To become blazon physical wealth ahhh those inspirations…. kick started such phenomenon? Illuminations…sparkling magnificence In a dwelling of sacred imagined thoughts Release yourself, and allow this hypnotic Infinite presence of nature… To awaken that acquainted sentient sound… unwind to a song of mystery clandestine tones swirling around ********** ... Oh drat ... my poor poor limited concepts Defeating all purpose of rhyme…. It is there & yet…reaching out Waiting to be all mine Trying to define something we’ve never known But feel the volume aglow Those are images which softly whisper Gently erupting voices, like a whimper can you feel it all aglow? Such beauty of places we’ve doubted, yet known? Professing the incarnation of sunsets & song What our hearts yearn for, yet profess Where lovely infinitely belongs & rests With reverence…..liberation devours the core Surpasses happy and penetrates the soul Compilation gifting understanding Infinite origin & spirits expanding A place where radiance dwells in sacred sounds… Beyond the volume of encompassing surround In a song to whom I once said “hello” In some definition of time long ago Still...it appears in my lighter version of rhyme and for certain has been a long long time [This message has been edited by LeeJ (03-12-2015 01:56 PM).] |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Ahhh . . . Someone else who likes the "drat" word. I find that very refreshing. This is an excellent piece of writing LeeJ. You give is much to contemplate, and I did my share. I read it twice, not because I couldn't understand it, but because I loved it. Oh no, I understood it very well thank you. All these lingering sights and smells and half remembered phrases, and best of all it all "unwind to a song of mystery." And everybody loves a mystery. ~*~ When they give you ruled paper write sideways. ~*~ |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa |
And she's done it again! Wonderful write, LeeJ, as usual. You always take us on such great journeys. Thank you. |
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latearrival Member Ascendant
since 2003-03-21
Posts 5499Florida |
Hi Lee,So glad to see you posting.This is wonderful. JO |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
Thanks so very much for your kind words....a work in progress, extremely rusty...lol, but thanks so much for stopping by. |
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miscellanea Member Elite
since 2004-06-24
Posts 4060OH |
LeeJ, It is so good to read you again, being exported into a world of sensory perception! Many of your stanzas were simply exquisite! Much enjoyed! Misc |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Dear LeeJ, you have been away for much too long ... I realize reading you now and being in awe of your talent. Fantastic writing indeed! Welcome back! Love, Margherita |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
enjoyed...james |
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