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Sea Swells |
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Richy Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 3050
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 The man in the corner put his back on a tree A branch let him borrow a hat made of shade A lady is wearing an outfit of nudity Trying to hide all the blindness she sees I once said no, to yesterday Time went to sleep and forgot to tell me My heart is now synching deep in your chest The tired offenders are, under arrest And all of the words that were boldly imbed Came from a promise that couldn’t be pled Every pleasure begins with a plea Every, teardrop swells from the see |
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JerryPat2 Member Laureate
since 2011-02-06
Posts 16975South Louisiana |
Damn good writing, Richy. Your knack with words are refreshing. ~*~ When they give you ruled paper write sideways. ~*~ |
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RedStoneEB Senior Member
since 2003-06-08
Posts 772uk |
its quite a nice poem you kinda get sucked into the lines and off you go into that mental wonderland letting poetry paint the pictures. nice. |
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Richy Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 3050 |
thank you fellah's I really appreciate you taking the time to read and leave a nice comment.. have a great day  |
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Lori Grosser Rhoden Member Patricius
since 2009-10-10
Posts 10202Fair to middlin' of nowhere |
I read this before but didn't have time to comment. I really don't know what to say without sounding like a broken record. Since actions speak louder than words...  ~L |
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LeeJ Member Patricius
since 2003-06-19
Posts 13296 |
beautifully done, a sea of many clandestine thoughts.... lovely |
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Richy Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 3050 |
Lori G and Lee J.. many thanks folks, have a great day today |
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